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Aww, poor little Lilith. I know how much children get attached to Teddy's and they are like real friends to them. So sad.

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I still am attached to mine. It made me choke a bit while writing cuz I’d be the same way, even to this day

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Nooo...Asmoden!! 😭 I remember this, you really upgraded it since you first sent it to me!! I love it!

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Hahaha when I first accidentally did and you had to pretend to forget everything haha. But yah I rewrote a lot of it and turning some of the other stuff into flashbacks instead. And thank youuuuuuu 🙏🙏🙏

I originally had it as first person too but it didn’t allow me to write how I want it and changed it all

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Ahaha yeah, I don't easily forget things but I am also good at just acting like I don't know 😜 'cause Kazzy doesn't know! Haha Third person is my preferred writing style, I feel so limited with first person but I also think that's my lack of experience with it, I've seen people write first person really well!

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Hahaha I’m so sorry. Thank you for keeping all that though! And it helps our characters don’t know haha.

Third person is def way more flexible. I like writing as first for some short stories. But not for a novel size one haha. It gets tough at that length.

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Haha no need to be sorry! and of course! I am experienced enough in rp not to metagame :)

I've only written in first person once or twice. After I read a book series in first person and wanted to give it a try. I think I struggle with it because I don't see the characters as myself, I am not my character, they are their own thing.

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Haha I rmr Jacob saying you were the best one to accidentally share that with cuz you wouldn’t metagame haha.

That’s a totally fair way of looking at it. If you can’t separate the two, it becomes really tough to write as first person. I enjoy doing it for non humanoid characters haha. I did one as Death and one as a cat.

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Haha your secrets --and his, are safe with me! 😜

Taking on death and a cat in first person could be fun!

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That's a hell of a beginning for an origin story!

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Hehe thank youuuuu!!!! I love her so much haha

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You’re giving me inspiration to potentially do this for my own character!

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Happy I inspired ya!! Honestly. Do it!! It lets you really get into their minds when it comes to roleplay heavy sessions (assuming your join a campaign with a lot of that)

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Oh I will have to join at least one campaign like that. Perhaps not right away, but certainly in the future if I am going to continue to love it.

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Yah you’re a story teller. You’ll want to. The battle heavy ones won’t hit the spot. But try both!

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Haha I will keep an open mind. That is my nature for pretty much most things.

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